AT:: Chocoa

Hello,i'm here to give you a short critique!

Even though i'm not a pixel artist,i'll try to critique this.

So lets start!

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<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> Good things - Your style is pretty cool,this is a cool sprite in general,
when i tried pixel it was very hard to me to make it look good while not clicking every pixel (Tracing a sketch or something) so that's a good thing too.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/> Bad things - Well first thing,when zooming you can see the lines between the ass and tail,it looks like the middle of the tail is connected to the ass rather then the tip.

- maybe try to make the tail's tip narrower(?),
in other words start it from the butt and not back.

And the second thing is that between the head and the back is accidentally colored in brown.

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That's it!
Hope it helped